Comments on: How not to write a lead http://carolynkellogg.com/2006/11/how-not-to-write-a-lead/ and Pinky's Paperhaus Wed, 03 Nov 2010 05:15:06 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0.1 By: Sean http://carolynkellogg.com/2006/11/how-not-to-write-a-lead/comment-page-1/#comment-1304 Sean Tue, 21 Nov 2006 15:39:36 +0000 http://pinkyspaperhaus.com/?p=304#comment-1304 huh. really? i much prefer to feel the reviewer present in the review. not ego-pieces, but reviews that really site the writer and their relationship with the work. i'm afraid i don't have the time right now to read that piece, but i guess i'm saying that i don't mind any of those first sentences! (as a trend, though, they're perhaps a little offputting.) huh. really? i much prefer to feel the reviewer present in the review. not ego-pieces, but reviews that really site the writer and their relationship with the work.

i’m afraid i don’t have the time right now to read that piece, but i guess i’m saying that i don’t mind any of those first sentences! (as a trend, though, they’re perhaps a little offputting.)

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